Thursday 26 July 2018

The Sunshine State

When I was on holiday, I went to California. It really was magical, when I was surfing I heard.... 


🏄🌤Sunshine State🌤🏄
       
“Woohoo” I thought to myself as I pushed the white, small, skinny fiberglass board with my hands. I just learnt how to duck dive and I loved going under the waves and hearing the whales from a distance, the salty water somehow always made it into my mouth, and when I returned to the surface of the clear water I could somehow smell the humid air. A set hasn’t formed - yet. Quickly I paddle to get out back before the waves start to create a set. Isn’t that sound beautiful or what? The sound of bubbles rising from the surface, it’s even more magical because the bubbles are made by a big turtle down in the blue. Although I was enjoying watching the fish and turtles play, I needed to get out back; a set is forming. Why are the waves so awesome, colossal, annoying all at the same time? Why is it that the waves decide now is a good time to form?? Ok, fine, paddle, paddle, paddle and…. BOOM!


⇨So hope you liked my holiday slow write! Give some feedback please!⇦

Also for the people who don't know what a slow write is its a list of ten things you have to do, and it goes something like this
Sentence 1:  Start with the word “woohoo!”
Sentence 2:  This sentence must use emotive words.
Sentence 3:  This sentence must focus on the sense of smell/taste/touch or hearing
Sentence 4:  Must be a 5 words long.
Sentence 5:  Must start with an adverb.
Sentence 6:  This sentence must contain a question mark
Sentence 7:  start with the word “Although”
Sentence 8:  This sentence must have 3 adjectives in a list
Sentence 9: This sentence must start with a “Why is it…” phrase
Sentence 10 :  This sentence must end with a sound word (onomatopoeia) and an
                      exclamation mark.